Avoiding Lloyd: Know the Bad Guy

Today’s post is brought to you by a guy named Lloyd.

Lloyd first hit 6’5” at age 15, and forty years later he still hasn’t found any good reason for being so tall. Any time he ever sets foot on a boat—even that glitzy megayacht he went aboard for a drinks party last summer—he smacks his head at least once, either in a doorway or on a ceiling beam.

His height could be very useful if it were intimidating to men as well as women, but instead of bulk, Lloyd’s size translates only into a looming awkwardness. When he deems it important (with bankers, potential dates, or his wealthy neighbors), he overplays this gawkiness in a way that comes off as innocent and charming—at least in the short term. He’s the perfect cocktail party schmoozer.

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Despite his thinning slicked-back hair, you might think he was still a teenager—rather than a card-carrying member of the AARP.

Of course, he only joined AARP for the discounted insurance rates.

Somewhere in Lloyd’s past is an ex-wife named Joan. They are now in contact only through their lawyers, usually shortly after Lloyd sends Joan a fraction of the agreed-upon alimony payment.

The nicest thing I can say about Lloyd is that he didn’t turn in his teenaged daughter Alison when he caught her selling marijuana—though that was only because he was worried about how it would reflect on him as a parent. He’s utterly self-centered, always looking for the easy way out.

Which has, you may be pleased to hear, gotten him into some hot water lately.

Can you tell I don’t like Lloyd?

Which brings us (at last) to the real reason for today’s post. Lloyd happens to be the antagonist, better known as “The Bad Guy,” in my new book. And the only way to fill in the last few holes in this story is to get to know Lloyd better: to figure out how he got into so much debt, and why telling the truth is always his last choice. To understand what makes this guy tick.

And I keep putting that off. Because who wants to spend time with a slimeball?

In fact, I’d been hoping to avoid spending any significant time with Lloyd, hoping he would just appear on the page when needed and then disappear again, back to his dingy office or home to his McMansion. But there’s only one way I can figure out whether he has a plan to get out of all the hot water he’s heated: spend some time with him. Because I have a feeling that the face he shows to the world is even more of an illusion than his tax returns.

Weaving together the final plot points of a story is like picking up random jigsaw puzzle pieces off the floor; I can only hope they fit into the picture nearing completion on the table. There’s no guarantee that getting to know Lloyd will actually make those pieces fit together, but I have to keep trusting my characters to point me in the right direction—even the ones I don’t like.

4 thoughts on “Avoiding Lloyd: Know the Bad Guy”

  1. Sharon says:

    Why just last week there was a female version of Lloyd on Dr. Phil. Why would I subject myself to an hour of interrogation into someone’s sliminess? I was trapped in a doctor’s office, couldn’t leave, volume on high, unable to escape the female Floyd. I can’t ever get that hour back, but I now have a little insight as to why someone might choose the low road. Maybe that’s how you might get access to that world and Dr. Phil might help explain it. Good luck :)
    Thanks for posting, it’s enjoyable to be with you on the journey. Sharon

  2. Carol Newman Cronin says:

    Sorry about the lost hour. I’ve gotten quite assertive about shutting off TVs in doctors’ offices, or at least turning down the volume. You’d be surprised how many other patients will be grateful.

    As for Dr. Phil, that sounds like nails on a chalkboard to me, but you’re right: it may be a good insight into Lloyd. Thanks for the suggestion.

  3. Bridget Chicoine says:

    Lloyd sounds like a character I’m going to love to hate! It will be fun to see how you develop him. I’ve created a villain or two that I’ve actually grown quite fond of, especially after I came to understand why they were so unlikable or difficult to deal with. At least you’re not alone in that–your other characters will help reveal his depths, :)

    1. Carol Newman Cronin says:

      Thanks for the comment; it’s good to know that villains grow on their creators, once we understand their backstory. Lloyd’s got history for sure; I just have to make sure it justifies his actions in the “present.”

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